2011年9月6日 星期二

Family Background

My name is Chen Tin-An. There are five members in my family. My parents manage a hairdressing salon. From their diligence, I deeply grasp that it is not easy to earn money. When I was a child, my parents always told me “when you do everything, you must have confidence in yourself.” Gradually, I develop independent personality in order not to increase my parents’ burden. My elder brother is college student. He has done many part-time jobs, and always shares his work experience with us. He let me know that I should grasp the opportunity positively. My elder sister is also a college student. When I have any problem, I always talks to her. She often gives me some great suggestions. I am pleased that I have lovely family.

4 則留言:

  1. My elder brother is college student.
    應該要加冠詞"a"。

    He let me know...
    "let"要不要加"s"?

    I am pleased that I have lovely family.
    "a lovely family"?

    如有誤,請不吝嗇指教。

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  2. I am pleased that I have lovely family.
    lovely family前是否要加個a?
    其餘應該沒問題吧 ^^

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  3. My elder brother is college student要加個a
    還有He let me know that I should grasp 要加s
    差不多是這樣^^

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  4. 1.My elder brother is college student.
    →college前面加a。
    2.He let me know that I should grasp the opportunity positively.
    →let+s。
    3.I am pleased that I have lovely family.
    →lovely前面加a,如果是我的話還會多加個such。

    (以上,淺見。)

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