I studied at Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School (NTCVS). I am glad that I can enter this school. I made a lot of good friends who are very active. I felt happy and interested in school every day. I took part in many sport contests which was held by the school. When a contest was coming, my classmates who participated in the contest and I practiced hard every Saturday. Due to our efforts, we usually got a prize. From these contests, not only can it promote the relationship among my classmates, but also we can enhance our teamwork.
When I entered the school, I didn’t have any certificate. But now, with the help of the teacher and my own efforts, I have five different certificates, such as level 3 of the test of English Ability Association, General English Proficiency Test (GEPT) for the elementary, class C skill category of Computer Software Application, and so on. Though I don’t have many certificates now, I will continue to study hard and receive more certificates. In addition, when I watched America movies, I often attempted to listen to their conversation without seeing Chinese captions. Our teacher also encouraged us to read more English magazines and listened to English music. Therefore, I have enhanced my English ability in NTCVS.
In my class, I worked as a cleaning crew leader, discipline leader, and class treasurer in turn. At first, I didn’t know what I should do when my classmates didn’t obey my orders. Gradually, I attempted to use many ways to make them obedient to me. From these positions, I learned the ability of problem solving. I’m glad that I can acquire a lot of experiences during my high school life.
I took part in many sport contests which was held by the school.
回覆刪除是which were
with the help of the teacher"s" and my own efforts
not only can it promote the relationship among my classmates, but also we can enhance our teamwork.
這一句感覺好像有點怪怪的....
Our teacher also encouraged us to read more English magazines and listened to English music.
這邊的listen應該不用ed
我覺得一開頭先寫比賽的是有點奇怪耶 先寫學習的部分好像比較好喔
回覆刪除還有就是時態有點不一致
1.I am glad that I can enter this school....I took part in many sport contests which was held by the school.
回覆刪除→全部都是I開頭,建議可以增添一些變化。
2....not only can it promote the relationship among my classmates, but also we can enhance our teamwork.
→but we can...
3.Our teacher also encouraged us to read...and listened to English music.
→listened要用原形。
﹡結論喜歡。
(以上,淺見。)
應該是"American movies"。
回覆刪除Therefore, I have enhanced my English ability in NTCVS.
不太懂為什麼要用完成式。
如有誤,請不吝嗇指教。