As to my future, I hope I can process my English skills, such as listening and talking. Although, I am poor at oral speaking skill, I plan to go abroad for at least one month to strengthen my English communication ability in college. In addition, I want to obtain more different certificates so that I can find more jobs after graduating from college. Therefore, I will study hard in college, become a useful person, and pay the strength in the society.
I believe that the more I learn, the more knowledge I can get. As long as I do my utmost to learn, my effort will pay off one day.
I hope I can process my English skills
回覆刪除為什麼是process@@?
第一句是progress哦 還有應該把talking改成speaking比較適合
回覆刪除可以再寫多一點=)
1.As to my future, I hope I can process my English skills, such as listening and talking.
回覆刪除→process換成progress in會不會比較好? 另外，such as前面不用逗點。
2....become a useful person...
→useful我沒看過用來修飾人哦…不知道行不行。
(以上，淺見。)
As to my future, I hope I can process my English skills, such as listening and talking.
回覆刪除應該是＂progress＂+＂speaking＂。
不確定＂pay the strength in the society＂的用法。
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。