I have a very introverted personality and I am not good at interacting and chatting with others. When I go into a new environment, I am often very quiet and don’t dare to talk with strangers. However, I usually do my best to do everything I did, or I will feel uneasy. In addition, I deal positively with my assignments without being hasty. If there are some group activities, I will take part in enthusiastically. During my school life, I attended many competitions, such as volleyball competition, basketball competition, tug-of-war contest, talent show and so on. Consequently, I can acquire a lot of valuable memories from these activities.
When being bored, I can draw some pictures. As I was an elementary school student, I once joined the art club. In addition, I often participated in drawing competitions in school and most of them I got prizes. I think that drawing can develop my countless imagination and innovation. I am also interested in making some handicrafts. As soon as I have time, I will make a few handicrafts. I feel making handicrafts can let me distract my attention, so I am able to reduce my academic pressure.
I will take part in enthusiastically
回覆刪除是不是要加個受詞
most of them I got prizes
不用I吧
第2段most of them I got prizes用法怪怪的哦
回覆刪除還有develop my countless imagination and innovation不用my吧?
1.However, I usually do my best to do everything I did...
回覆刪除→我覺得可以改成I usually try my best to do whatever I did...
2.Consequently, I can acquire a lot of valuable memories from these activities.
→acquire我想換成get或attain呢…
3.I often participated in drawing competitions in school and most of them I got prizes.
→I often participated in drawing competitions in school and got prizes in most of them.
(以上，淺見。)
When I go into a new environment,...
回覆刪除想要＂step into a new environment＂。
In addition, I often ...and most of them I got prizes.
想寫＂ got prizes in most of them.＂
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。