2011年3月2日 星期三

Helping peolpe makes me happy

  I once lived in Taipei, and worked as a volunteer in a hospital. It really felt good to get the opportunities to help people. One morning an elder woman who always looked ruthless in the hospital took a walk in the park. At that moment, I attempted to talk to her, but she pretended that she didn't notice me. Thus, I was very depressed. I really wanted to make friends with her and knew why she always looked unhappy. From then on, I visited her about three times a week. She began to talk to me gradually, but didn't talk a lot. Eventually, I realized why she often looked unhappy. The woman didn't have any family and got cancer. Therefore, she felt very lonely. After contacting with her, I decided to visited her every day and take care of her in her last life. After this event, I grasped that helping people makes not only me but also other people feel happy.

9 則留言:

  1. It really felt good to...
    個人覺得"It"當主詞怪怪的,我也許會寫:
    >It is good to ...
    >I really felt good to ...

    對了☆
    感謝妳的留言。

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  2. 所以課本是寫錯的意思嗎
    因為我跟你寫一樣!!!!!

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  3. I really wanted to make friends with her and knew why she always looked unhappy.這具的knew應該是要用原形know哦

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  4. elder woman 我覺得是elderly耶…
    (個人淺見。)
    in her last life 我覺得可以改成 the rest of her life (淺見+1)

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  5. 數小好棒
    我找不太到錯的地方
    看完大家的意見才意識到XD

    文章裡面的女孩感覺很難相處~~~XD

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  6. After contacting with her, I decided to visited her every day and take care of her in her last life 我覺得阿那個contacting with her
    要不要改成知道他的情況或他一開始不願理你的真相 因為你前面就有拜訪他那就算接觸了 最後那個算是你得知的答案或事實他沒有親人朋友 所以我覺得文意有一點怪怪

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  7. really wanted to make friends with her and knew why she always looked unhappy.
    裡的knew要改成know~

    我喜歡妳的內容~~
    嘻嘻 =目

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  8. The woman didn't have any family and got cancer.
    這裡可以再多描述一點。

    我一開始也想寫當志工遇到老婆婆,可是想不出好劇情...
    數小真厲害,想像力分我一點好不好Q_Q

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