2011年4月27日 星期三
comparing-2
John Adams and Thomas Jefferson were contemporary Americans. Although they didn't have relationship, they had some common points. For example, John Adams played important role in American Revolution, and so did Thomas Jefferson. Both John Adams and Thomas delegated to the Continental Congress. They also were signers of Declaration of Independence. In addition, John Adams studied and practiced law. Likewise, Thomas Jefferson studied and practiced law. Also, they had ever been elected to be the Presidents of United States. Finally, I feel that it was a pity they were not born on the same day.
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delegate不是名詞嗎??
回覆刪除They also were signers of Declaration of Independence.
應該是they were also.......吧
they had ever been elected to be the Presidents of United States.
had ever 是這樣用嗎??
以上.......
They also were signers of Declaration of Independence. In addition, John Adams studied and practiced law.
回覆刪除signers前面+個the會不會比較好~~
John Adams played important role in American Revolution
回覆刪除少了an
They also were signers of Declaration of Independence.
應該是were also吧
1.Both John Adams and Thomas delegated to the Continental Congress.
回覆刪除→Both John Adams and Thomas were delegates to the Continental Congress.
2.They also were signers of Declaration of Independence.
→They were also signers of Declaration of Independence.
(以上，淺見…)
(結論句真有創意，呵。)
delegate有動詞沒錯喔
回覆刪除They also were
also和were是打反嗎(思
然後就沒了(笑
Adams played important role 要加an哦
回覆刪除They also were signers 改成they were also比較好哦
John Adams played important role in American Revolution
回覆刪除裡的 played 和 important 要+ 一個 an 喔!
以上~
＂played important role＂加＂an＂。
回覆刪除有爭議的→＂...were delegates to＂想這樣寫。
＂also＂＆＂were＂掉換。
都是前面提過的陳腔濫調……
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。
小錯誤前面都提過了，
回覆刪除我覺得結論句很有創意^_^b