2011年5月18日 星期三

contrasting - 1

I am looking for an apartment. Now, there are two apartments. One is Fairfax Apartment, and the other is CAMPUS APTS; therefore, I am troubled which apartments I should choose. After comparing to them, I decide to rent CAMPUS APTS. For example, Fairfax has two large bedrooms. However, CAMPUS only has one bedroom. Fairfax doesn’t allow to raise pets. In contrast, CAMPUS allows pets. In addition, Fairfax has furnishings, but CAMPUS doesn’t. Finally, the rent of Fairfax is more expensive then that of CAMPUS. Because only I live in, the apartment isn’t too luxurious. Consequently, I choose CAMPUS.

3 則留言:

  1. Because only I live in, the apartment isn’t too luxurious.
    Because only I live in對不對(汗

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  2. Finally, the rent of Fairfax is more expensive then that of CAMPUS.
    是than
    Because only I live in, the apartment isn’t too luxurious.
    這一句有點怪怪的>"<

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  3. Because only I live in, the apartment isn’t too luxurious改成the apartment need not be too luxurious會不會比較好?

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