2011年5月18日 星期三

contrasting - 2

I want to hire a new English instructor. Now, I receive two resumes from Lynn Whitnall and Debra Fines. After studying their resumes, I decide to hire Debra. First, Debra has more education than Lynn. Debra had studied in three universities, but Lynn had only one. Second, Debra has five different employments; however, Lynn has only three different employments. Third, Lynn can speak Spanish, French, and Japanese. Unlike Lynn, Debra can only speak French. Although Lynn can speak more languages than Debra, I am emphasis on English. Last, Debra published a book about English verb tense. On the other hand, Lynn received Excellent in Teaching Award, 2004. Though both of them are outstanding, Debra is suitable for my requirement. Therefore, I choose Debra.

7 則留言:

  1. 1.I am emphasis on English.
    →I put emphasis on English.
    2.全篇時態統一比較好哦。

    (以上,淺見…)

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  2. Debra had studied in three 時太好像不太對 用has studied會不會比較好
    I am emphasis on English要把am改成put

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  3. On the other hand, Lynn received Excellent in Teaching Award...
    "Excellent"應該是"Excellence"才對。

    如有誤,請不吝嗇指教。

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