I want to hire a new English instructor. Now, I receive two resumes from Lynn Whitnall and Debra Fines. After studying their resumes, I decide to hire Debra. First, Debra has more education than Lynn . Debra had studied in three universities, but Lynn had only one. Second, Debra has five different employments; however, Lynn has only three different employments. Third, Lynn can speak Spanish, French, and Japanese. Unlike Lynn , Debra can only speak French. Although Lynn can speak more languages than Debra, I am emphasis on English. Last, Debra published a book about English verb tense. On the other hand, Lynn received Excellent in Teaching Award, 2004. Though both of them are outstanding, Debra is suitable for my requirement. Therefore, I choose Debra.
應該沒問題吧 ^^
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回覆刪除1.I am emphasis on English.
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2.全篇時態統一比較好哦。
(以上,淺見…)
Debra had studied in three 時太好像不太對 用has studied會不會比較好
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On the other hand, Lynn received Excellent in Teaching Award...
回覆刪除"Excellent"應該是"Excellence"才對。
如有誤,請不吝嗇指教。
數小好棒:D
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