We have to wear uniforms when we go to school to study. However, this rule causes many students arguments. Some students agree with wearing uniforms, but others don’t. In my opinion, I am in favor of wearing uniforms. First, we don’t have to trouble what we should wear tomorrow. It helps us save a lot of time to think about that. Second, when we wear uniforms, we would pay attention to our behaviors. If we do bad things, the passengers can recognize the school which we study and inform our school. Finally, a guard in the school can know easily if there is a stranger going into the school. Therefore, it can reduce risks when we are in the school. Although some students insist that wearing uniforms is uncomfortable and wastes money, I think wearing uniforms can reduce troubles and saves more money to buy other clothes. It is for all the above-mentioned reasons that I believe wearing uniforms is the best choice for us.
However, this rule causes many students arguments.
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I think wearing uniforms can reduce troubles and saves more money to buy other clothes.
這邊應該是save吧? 因為前面的can
rule causes many students arguments.
回覆刪除裡的students 我想要在S後面+個"'"吧
Although some students insist that wearing uniforms is uncomfortable and wastes money,
裡的is 我會寫be
因為前面有個insist((後面不是要接should VR嗎?
I think wearing uniforms can reduce troubles and saves more money
裡的saves 要去S喔!
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1.However, this rule causes many students arguments.
回覆刪除→However, this rule causes many students' arguments.
2.Finally, a guard in the school can know easily if there is a stranger going into the school.
→Finally, a guard in the school can know easily if there is a stranger goes into the school.
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I think wearing uniforms can reduce troubles and "save" more money to buy other clothes
回覆刪除However, this rule causes many "students'" arguments
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承前言。
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＂save＂。 ）
inform是不是要搭配of呀?
回覆刪除(不太清楚O_______O)
causes many students arguments是students' arguments哦
回覆刪除we don’t have to trouble what we should wear改成we son't have to trouble about~
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