Getting married has some effects of that decision on my life. First of all, I have to earn more money because the member would become more. In addition, if I have children, I will take care of them. Therefore, I feel very tired. Finally, I have to be more patient. If I have a fight with my husband, I will try to calm down. Consequently, I can become my children’s good example. If I want to get married, I would consider these effects.
Getting married has some effects of that decision on my life
回覆刪除覺得of that可以不用
because the member would become more
memebr要不要加s啊?
member要加s哦~~
回覆刪除還是只要生一個小孩XD?
怎麼覺得這文章怪怪的?
回覆刪除Getting married has some effects of that decision on my life. 這邊的 of that decision可以去掉
member 我會換成family members
以上唷唷唷唷^_^
Getting married has some effects of that decision on my life.
回覆刪除裡的 of that decision 我換刪掉耶!
以上~
because the member would become more
回覆刪除嗯...改成
because members would become more會不會好一點
of that decision on my life
我覺得把of that decision 刪掉會好一點欸
覺得這篇文章已經確定結婚後的生活
比較沒有明顯的造成什麼影響的感覺呢
Getting married has some effects of that decision on my life.
回覆刪除嗯，如果閣下欲強調＂decision＂，在下提議一句：
＂（The decision of ）getting married has some effects on my life.＂
＂...the number of members would be more.＂
私心產物，請笑納。
In addition, if I have children, I will take care of them.
私心產物二＂...I need to take care of them.＂
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。
I have to earn more money because the "members" would become more.
回覆刪除money不可數應該用much修飾或是寫much more
1.Getting married has some effects of that decision on my life.
回覆刪除﹡這句怪怪的，可是我不知道要怎麼改呢。
2.First of all, I have to earn more money because the member would become more.
﹡member+s
﹡以上，淺見…
Getting married has some effects of that decision on my life這具蠻奇怪的耶
回覆刪除because the member would become more要不要改成family menbers will increase?
以上